Quan
West
June
27, 2013
English
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v A reporters point a view on who is better
and he compares every detail.
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(Swider,
Matt. "PS4 vs Xbox One: Which Is Better?" TechRadar. Matt
Swider, 11 June 2013. Web. 27 June 2013.)
This website
is very helpfully because it goes in detail about the two systems. It talks
about the online features, if you can use pre-owned games, the prices, which
has better graphics, which has better memory, the better controller and which
one appeals more to the eye.
http://www.techradar.com/us/news/gaming/consoles/ps4-vs-xbox-720-which-is-better-1127315
v Talking about this topic in the football
locker room.
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(Football,
Iowa State, personal interview. 27 June 2013)
This was quite fun to go around and
interview 30 of teammates. The reactions I got from most of them were that
there going to buy a PS4 because it is cheaper and looks a lot better than the
Xbox One. There were a few people that are die-hard Xbox fans that are converting
to the PS4. There was 5 people that said there going to stick with the Xbox
One.
I'm sure TechRadar is helpful (along with many other technology and consumer report websites). I think is seems under-researched. Have you searched other such places? If so, are there differing opinions? I think you need to take this to that next level. Your audience doesn't need a rehash of this one source along with some chats with your friends. Show a much more disciplined synthesis of several sources on the subject, and it's more likely your audience will find your argument more persuasive. Let them think the phrase "this guy has really done his research!" I'm not sure they'll think that right now, and they'd likely do much better just to do to that website and skip your argument.
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